Ladies first, then.
I rewrote the basic plot in my Projects section and began to write. I can hear her voice in my head, I can see the way she moves, how she sounds, how she walks...its a bit weird to be honest.
Now, I had been planning to write a story for each of the family members to give them each their own time in the sun, as it were. I am not trashing plot#2, but making it perhaps the next book after this one, since Alice is being such a bossy fourteen year old right now.